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Give me the truth,
Just tell me what happened,
Tell me if you saved my heart.
Your hiding your true self,
from my heart and my eyes,
your hiding in your shame and lies.
Tell me the truth about,
why you won't look at me,
Whats changed? Help me-
understand why i fell,
into your arms, when you dont want me,
when you could love me.
©2006-2009 ~Dyingfish
:icondyingfish:

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Just a little poem i wrote a minute ago.
please tell me what you think :D

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:iconaviance:
i like this muchos my little pally:P

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I'll wait until ive conquered this dreadfull planet...
:icondarkmatterfreak:
this is a very good poem :) I like it alot

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Life is like a bag of Video games Others play out our life :thumb54619065:
:iconthe-grifter:
I really like it. Its touching and the structure you've used really adds an immediacey to it. Carry on the good word chewy knees....:P
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:icondyingfish:
thankies ^^

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UCLan Raver Till I Die!!!
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:icondarkmatterfreak:
your welcome :)

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Life is like a bag of Video games Others play out our life :thumb54619065:
:icondynv:
:+favlove: but I'd prefer a title that summarize the general feeling.

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Fier membre de *francophones & ~quebec !

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